tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7784309728196460634.post7577677078222148095..comments2007-11-14T01:38:29.188-08:00Comments on Fantastic Fictions: The Nereid by Jason CampbellAhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14865607115402870492noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7784309728196460634.post-71020657412115489152007-08-30T17:13:00.000-07:002007-08-30T17:13:00.000-07:00Good stuff, I really like it. I was expecting a t...Good stuff, I really like it. I was expecting a twist, but I didn't expect the one you chose. My only nit to pick is with the last sentence. What is the antescedant of "it"? The ocean? The thought of stopping by? Being together? <BR/><BR/>I don't know how to describe my enjoyment of this story except to say that it left me with a satisfied smile. Thanks.James T Woodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13870789574689752112noreply@blogger.com